Critical Investigation targets.

For my next draft I need to add more theory and analysis of each text, as I feel that I have not done enough of that. Ermm I also think I need focus more on the contemporary media landscape and the changes surrounding LGBT groups over time. I think in every paragraph I need to summarise  a critical debate in order to gain more marks, as I do not have enough of that in my paragraphs explicitly. I need to sort out my bibliography as I have not set out my Works Consulted part properly, including my footnotes. My last paragraphs & conclusion need more work in terms of theory, critical debates and structure cos it's generally all over the place. I am going to read over everything with the mark scheme next to me and then have a look at what I've done wrong, what needs to be added etc.